The animations should be smoother. There should be a normal story line. I only give 4 because the ending was pretty funny and at least you tried... Keep animating and you'll get better.
Sorry, apology rock!
Lol! Great comedy! No need to improve this one. Well maybe the animation could be better, but this one is pretty good too! Keep up the good work
It's pretty good at all. You just need to work on it more and thats it.
Yeah, it was something kinda fast I just whipped up during the time I had freetime from homework (which wasn't very often). I'm going to try and put more work into future =P. Thanks for the review, though =)
:D :D :D
It made me laugh. Great parody. Kepp up the good work!
Scenario is pretty good, but it's way too short. You need to make it longer (more scenes or smth) and add some backrounds. Also You should work on animation too... I feel you made it in a short time, while you should work on it at least for a week.
P.S. That's only my opinion.
Oh I thought it wasn't.
That's a really great animation. The most funny things for me was the spelling mistakes. I'm still laughing while writing this review, Kepp up the good work
It was great. I really liked the story. To start as evile wins, and end with newgrounds victory was a good idea! The animation is pretty good, but I know Yo can improve it! On the whole this movie is great. Keep it up! 5/5, 9/10
I have nothing to say. It's just Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
first lithuanian work i ever seen on Newgrounds
Short, but pretty realistic and animations are very smooth...
P.S. I am lithuanian.
... That's awesome! LOL! I almost fell off from chair when she left the game!
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